My Mum
Today I felt like going to bed early because I was feeling tired. And when I was just nearly asleep, my mum shouted my name and started screaming at me. Then my mum and dad had a huge argument. Why? BECAUSE I BOUGHT JUICE AT A VENDING MACHINE AT SCHOOL BECAUSE I FORGOT MY DRINK. And even worse, with my own money! And even more worse, it didn’t cost a lot! She thought if I buy my own drinks, it won’t “teach†me to not forget my drink again! But what if I’m thirsty? And what if I don’t mind spending a few pennies in a nice drink? What about all those cigarettes and alcohol she has?
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I hate to be nit-picky, but when you say “worse†the “more†part is implied. I would say “worse still†or “even worse than thatâ€. And if you’re thirsty, you know you could find a drinking fountain right? Unless your school doesn’t have any. I agree with you, I’m just saying there’s a thing called water, it’s quite nice.
co-hater: Yeah cough Grammar Nazis cough.
And, yeah, your mom is a spaz if she goes all out on cigs and booze and yells at you for buying some juice.